tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post5717585159270270003..comments2023-07-01T10:09:14.750-04:00Comments on The Raven Desk: TEASER TUESDAY XISumayyahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08407376976946002521noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-91763593707265404672010-01-03T06:45:01.091-05:002010-01-03T06:45:01.091-05:00Beautiful cover pic! *loves it loads* Excellent te...Beautiful cover pic! *loves it loads* Excellent teaser! I love your dialogue, and the descriptive sentences! I'm hoping to do this Teaser Tuesday thing soon too! Never too late to start, right?Kathy Bradeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01370707259209847339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-30586557200733247532009-12-30T00:14:23.811-05:002009-12-30T00:14:23.811-05:00Love the cover, she's gorgeous! I also like h...Love the cover, she's gorgeous! I also like how she tries to talk herself into believing she's crazy. Great inner-dialogue.J.S. Woodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09231458559331295121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-18777247747118865712009-12-29T23:48:13.288-05:002009-12-29T23:48:13.288-05:00Eek! Love this teaser! The dialogue is awesome and...Eek! Love this teaser! The dialogue is awesome and so fluid.LizPagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07863167617453436250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-7640483613501387702009-12-29T21:56:09.946-05:002009-12-29T21:56:09.946-05:00You made a cover?! Judgement!
Just kidding, I lov...You made a cover?! Judgement!<br /><br />Just kidding, I love it (and I made one too). Teaser was so nice. I'm wondering where these hallucinations are coming from. I'm loving this so far and Behzad too. Can't wait for more!Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01846922950214539315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-59834312948033323122009-12-29T20:41:17.320-05:002009-12-29T20:41:17.320-05:00Your writing is always so damn beautiful. The dial...Your writing is always so damn beautiful. The dialogue was wonderful, and the cover ROCKS!S.H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/18285987152225186177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-2527052766980550782009-12-29T16:24:35.241-05:002009-12-29T16:24:35.241-05:00love the cover!
I swear, your dialogue is so real...love the cover!<br /><br />I swear, your dialogue is so real that it just pulls me in. And even in third person, i feel the voice in this. Great job. Just awesome.DrunkenLilacshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16170155991218831990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-87157020384038676282009-12-29T16:01:25.893-05:002009-12-29T16:01:25.893-05:00LOVE the cover! You have some mad Photoshop skillz...LOVE the cover! You have some mad Photoshop skillz. lol<br /><br />I liked the dialogue between the two characters and the fact that I felt like it was almost a dream/hallucination like your MC said. Nice teaser! :)Rebecca A. Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14124059241043445352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-17457761584714486732009-12-29T15:33:48.248-05:002009-12-29T15:33:48.248-05:00I love it! And the cover is so great! <3
I wan...I love it! And the cover is so great! <3<br /><br />I want to know what happens next! :DKarla Calalanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17414349286625200655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-42297818374100247442009-12-29T15:27:26.052-05:002009-12-29T15:27:26.052-05:00The cover -- THE COVER! I love it!
Also, you know...The cover -- THE COVER! I love it! <br />Also, you know, great teaser ;PLia Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04316015024213640823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-12319029112312195572009-12-29T14:43:40.201-05:002009-12-29T14:43:40.201-05:00So dreamlike, as if anything in the world could ha...So dreamlike, as if anything in the world could happen next. <br /><br />And of course, the character names are awesome.Ifihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08968630996210057407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-49835681429919411002009-12-29T14:08:51.341-05:002009-12-29T14:08:51.341-05:00Wow! Such beautiful, yet haunting descriptions her...Wow! Such beautiful, yet haunting descriptions here of the desert. Lot of suspense, and you totally get into Bezhad's mind and get caught up in the panic of what's going on. <br /><br />Great job!Katie Ashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11542035499311859866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-12973665057058378962009-12-29T13:12:33.666-05:002009-12-29T13:12:33.666-05:00The cover is lovely!
And I adore the interaction ...The cover is lovely!<br /><br />And I adore the interaction between both of them--it rings so true. Also, awesome dialogue :)in which a girl readshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563423294648988362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-84693179455788447752009-12-29T11:33:06.369-05:002009-12-29T11:33:06.369-05:00What's he gonna do next???? LOL
That indeed w...What's he gonna do next???? LOL <br />That indeed was a tease! Nicely done.<br /><br />Ps I heart the pic :)Annie McElfreshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312634754232333138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-16956800633927810332009-12-29T10:28:48.699-05:002009-12-29T10:28:48.699-05:00Great interaction between them. Lots going on und...Great interaction between them. Lots going on under the surface. Very nice! :DJamie Blairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15899384749829457808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-20217085618728037152009-12-29T10:27:57.419-05:002009-12-29T10:27:57.419-05:00I adore the dialogue here. And I love your charact...I adore the dialogue here. And I love your characters' names too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-88925595771336127692009-12-29T10:27:42.116-05:002009-12-29T10:27:42.116-05:00I really love the picture too - when you get publi...I really love the picture too - when you get published you should insist on doing your own cover! Great tease too. I'm very curious what he's going to do.Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12526875813399934443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-55476342928289822222009-12-29T08:40:40.112-05:002009-12-29T08:40:40.112-05:00No Sushi! Don't end it there. I demand to know...No Sushi! Don't end it there. I demand to know what's going to happen next. lol.<br /><br />But this was a great tease. I agree with Amna, the interaction between these two was awesome and I'm still curious about who this guy is.<br /><br />I LOVE the cover. It looks so professional.Raven Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03538947519732493635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9059240180887006567.post-16317765123915478142009-12-29T07:53:30.973-05:002009-12-29T07:53:30.973-05:00First of all, that picture is awesome!
And I love...First of all, that picture is awesome!<br /><br />And I loved this teaser, I love the interaction between these two characters. Curiosity is now burning in my mind!<br /><br />/stops-fangirl-vomiting-all-over-shushiAmnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15286300957307296262noreply@blogger.com